Fsp reconciliation: Story reorganization
This page now has a simpler router (no CYOA) and a reorganized, linear story that follows the two fish and the three land managers.
My questions for the storyline:
- What about the title? Is the new title fitting?
- Should I make a set of similar images in vertical orientation for mobile?
- I left the funny sayings, speech bubbles, and thought bubbles off of the images for now. Would they add to the story? Things that the managers or fish are saying/thinking, especially with a nod to brevity and humor?
I still have some FSP things to reconcile, but wanted to share the main reorganization before I start too much refining.
I think I got the router cleaned up and working, but it would be good to check it and see if I got everything that can be deleted.
Edited by Archer, Althea Anne