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More review edits

Azadpour, Elmera requested to merge more-review-edits into main

Hey Hayley, as noted here’s some edits made after getting reviewer #3s comments back. You can also see the notes here in the reconsiliation doc.

  1. The number of studies has been added to each indicator level in parentheses.

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  1. water related hazards tooltip definition

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  1. Drop the use of "we" when talking about EJ

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  2. edit "team" language - what is described is definitely the purpose of the project, but there are also other objectives for the team. 

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  3. Change language from damages to losses

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  4. Drop the use of "your" language and reword to "conditions associated with water insecurity"

    Screenshot 2024-08-05 at 1.55.47 PM.png7. change language from "Many Hispanic households lack adequate plumbing" to more inclusive language

    Screenshot 2024-08-05 at 1.56.45 PM.png 8. Remove language like "Dreadful" and "nightmare"

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    Let me know what you think! Thanks!

Edited by Azadpour, Elmera

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