More review edits
Hey Hayley, as noted here’s some edits made after getting reviewer #3s comments back. You can also see the notes here in the reconsiliation doc.
- The number of studies has been added to each indicator level in parentheses.
- water related hazards tooltip definition
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Drop the use of "we" when talking about EJ
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edit "team" language - what is described is definitely the purpose of the project, but there are also other objectives for the team.
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Change language from damages to losses
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Drop the use of "your" language and reword to "conditions associated with water insecurity"
7. change language from "Many Hispanic households lack adequate plumbing" to more inclusive language
8. Remove language like "Dreadful" and "nightmare"
Let me know what you think! Thanks!
Edited by Azadpour, Elmera